Plain Talk Challenge

Plain Talk Principle: Keep Sentences Short.

Readability research says:

If the number of words in a sentence is… Then the % of people that can understand the document easily is…
10 100%
17 97%
33 33%
44 8%

Rewrite the 43 word sentence below.

It is considered that no real risk exists, and therefore at this stage no emergency action will be undertaken, although if the situation changes in the foreseeable future we will review it and make the appropriate decision at that stage, depending on circumstances.

Rewrite the 50 word sentence below. 

This CITATION AND NOTICE OF ASSESSMENT shall be deemed to be a final order of the Department and not subject to review by any court or agency unless, within fifteen (15) working days from the receipt of this CITATION AND NOTICE OF ASSESSMENT, the employer submits a Notice of Appeal.